Thứ Ba, 20 tháng 10, 2009

Write a paragraph 'bout a person who you love or admire!

There r a lot of person I love or admire such as: my mother, my En teacher, my best friend, my monitor,... but I'd like to tell you about my favourite singer: Thu Thuy. She's 25 years old. She's cute with bright skin, black eyes and long hair. Now, she's living in HCM city with her family. When she was young, her mother sent her to HCM children's house to lear singing. Many years later, she passed into Art college. When she was 17, she and her friends set up May Trang band - one of famous band now. Then, she left for taking part in HAT band. To prove that she was a real singer with good voice and can be a good singer by herself, she chose the way to sing solo. That was an excellent choice but difficult to do for a young singer like her who had no manager, a few fans in that time. However, her dream came true after a short time. She did allthings by herself: looked for songs to perform, designed her clothes, made up, ... and she had her own style. In spite of a famous singer now, she doesn't forget to do charity. She called out her fans to give her candies instead of flowers or presents. Each three months, she and her fans come to the orphanage or disabled center to give sweets and sing many lovely songs for the children. That made me admire her a lots. Besides, her character made me completely love her. She has a good-looking like other singers but she's not only very friendly with her friends and her fans but also with strangers. She's kindly, generous and humorous. I'd ever met some famous singers, but they r a little friendly. It's so unnatural. The other as miss VN idol proved to be ashame. I love the person who is friendly and confident. That made Thu Thuy different from others. Whatever she do makes me think a lots. Her actions help me know many things 'bout the life: caring 'bout the unhappy, when I try my best to do sth, everything will come true, learn how to do by myself, be friendly with everybody-each smile will bring a new friend, when you give the love, you'll recieve other's. The saying of hers I like best is "Thank myself yesterday for having made up myself today". I hope that I can have a chance to meet her to show her how much I love her.








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  1. hey Ha!
    yes!that's me,Nhi.thanks for your comment,you're right,my Friend-Nhan realized my mistake just like you!!^^
    i read your essay!it's quite good!
    and you know Thu Thuy looks so good when she stands next to you!^^!just kidding.be happy!
    bless you!

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  2. i love Thu Thuy but not much as you!!!
    (here you are,2 comments at a time!^^)

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  3. yup! Thu Thủy is really beautiful ^^

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